Thursday, December 13, 2012
Self Reflective Letter to Myself
Throughout this quarter,
we are focusing on different aspects of California. My understanding on
California before I attended this class is “sunshine and beach.” In
fact, what I think of is not true. There are more than I thought. After
doing many exercises in-class or out-of-class, I learnt more about
California, it is not only the geographic of the state, but more about
Californian’s daily life, also on their dreams. In this English 1B
class, I have learnt more about California morally, not just the
physical view of the state. Moreover, I have enhanced my writing and
reading skills to write a more fluent essay.
As mentioned
above, I was learning about California this quarter. In my essays, I
was not just focusing on one topic of California, but many of them. I
wrote the identity of being a Californian and the dark side of
California. I remembered when I stepped into the classroom, I knew a
little about California. However, after reading some articles in the
book California Dream and Realities
and the article “Silicon Boys” written by David A. Kaplan, I learnt
about California Dream. Although the property of this dream is just same
with the other, because it is special in California, therefore it is
worth a unique name. This word is not familiar to me at first, but after
I wrote my first two essays on discussing about the California Dream, I
have better understanding on it. The word is related to the Gold Rush
in California in 1850s, because it led to the rapid development of
California, it also made the California a state full of diversity.
However, this development not just enhanced the living quality, it also
brought some bad effects. In my out- of-class essay #2, I am writing
about the consequences of chasing the California Dream. During the class
period, we are asked to divide into four groups. Each group has to
design a teaching session and present in class. I remembered I was in
the group teaching the poem “Indian Cartography” by Deborah Miranda, it
was a interesting experience to me because I have never tried to have
presentation in class in the form of teaching. This encouraged me to do
more research on my assigned topic and learnt how to present my idea
well in class. Although I am not using this poem as a reference to write
my essay, I learnt about the struggling of those Indians who were
facing the destruction of their culture. I did some research and wrote
my essay. I loved it the most overall, because I loved to analyze
problems. When I was in high school in Hong Kong, we were always writing
this kind of essays. And it developed my interest on writing this. In
these three essays, I learnt about the deep part of the state
California. What I have learnt in this class is very useful to my
future, no matter in my further education or when I started to work.
Before I
came to the United States, I also studied English in my high school. The
way to develop our reading skill is to read and read and read. However,
we were not used to discuss the deep meaning or message the writer was
talking about. I felt confused when I was doing that. It seemed I am
learning nothing from those reading. And in my point of view, the
purpose of reading was just preparing for your Advanced Level
examinations to fight for your to ticket to the university. However,
after few quarters studying English classes in Foothill, and this class
should be my last English class in Foothill, I learnt about what is the
real meaning of reading. During my English 1A and 1B classes, I had to
do more readings than ever before. I had to write about something that I
was not so familiar to. It was hard for me at first because when I
looked at the writing guidelines for different essays in my English 1B
class, I was almost fainted. Because I am not get used to read, or I
should say I only read those which I am interested in, but obviously not
the topic on finding the identity or discussion the dreams of
California at first. When I was in class, I knew I made a mistake. I
have learnt what is the purpose of reading; it is not just about your
reading speed, but also to find out what the writer wanted to tell us.
And soon I started to read more and more, and I learnt that if you want
to have a better understanding on a topic, you have to do more research,
read through those articles that might be useful for you to know more
about it.
Professor
Lewis told us that reading and writing are tightly packed together.
Actually I did not feel it at all when I was in my high school since the
English examination had 4 parts: reading, listening, writing and oral
presentation. I always thought that reading did not relate writing so
much. However, in this class, while I was writing the essay, the other
thing I was doing is reading through the essay and the sources I found
for quotations. About my writing process, before I start writing the
essay, I have to write a detailed outline, which means I have to be done
with my research beforehand. I am not get used to it because I am such a
lazy person. But the things did
not go well when I was writing my essays, so I learnt to prepare all the
stuff I need before I start to write the essay. During writing the
essay, it does not matter if you make some mistake or present your idea
badly, this is just a problem of wordings, and it can be easily fixed.
After writing, I learnt to proofread the essay again, because it is a
way to correct some minor mistakes inside the essay. Moreover, I also
learnt about the importance of peer response. It is a way to let you
know about other people opinion on your essay. This is a good way to
both enhance reading and writing skills on both sides. And each other
learn more during the process. About the writing product, I learnt about
the flow and cohesion on the essay level. It is very important in an
essay because it determines whether the readers want to read on or not.
If your essay has a good flow, readers may find the track and they might
find it interesting so that they keep on reading. On the paragraph
level, I learnt about the importance of presenting your ideas. In a
paragraph, it should be started with a topic sentence so that the reader
can easily know what you are going to talk about in the following
paragraph. And then you write about the support of the topic sentence.
It is a good way to promote your idea to others. On the sentence level, I
learnt about different sentence structures and how they affect the
fluency on the essay. I learnt about the appositives. It helps me to
connect my ideas in a more fluent way and it enhances also the paragraph
level and the essay level.
In this
course, I have learnt a lot, not just on California, but also on the
reading and writing skills. When I looked at my grades of my essays, I
really see that I am improving. It is a great encouragement for me
because I have more passions to keep on doing those researches or
writing essays. The topic we discussed in the class helps me to have
better image on what I should do in the future. Take the out-of-class#2
as a reference, while I am chasing my California Dream in the future, I
have to be aware of the side effects because of the dream.
Who Paid for Dreams and Development?
In “The First” by Gary Soto, the author describes a beautiful nature of America and life of native Indians. However, their life was changed because of the appearance of European. The European cut down trees and destroyed the living environment of the Indians. The Indians were forced to leave their own land and lived in somewhere else. The developed area grew faster and faster and many problem cause with the fast development, such as less land for people to walk and live, air pollution, water pollution, forest destroyed and unnatural path. At that time, no one was aware with these problems. After so many years of development, things describe in “Orange County Historian” by Michael J. O’Brien happened. There were no more space to build roads and traffic was everywhere. When gas was out, people abandoned their car on the road. Grocery store ran out of stock quickly and kids formed gangs and steal food to make sure their needs been met. Supply could not meet the demand. Mormons started selling emergency supply to keep people from dying. They earned some fortune in a short while. People started missing the nature.
From the summery of two poems, we could see a “cause and effect” relationship occur. The cause is “The First” which people started destroying the natural environment; the effect is “Orange County Historian” which there was no more land for development and a bad society. In “The First”, we could also found that the variety of animals and insects were decreasing because some of them had been turned into handbags and jewelries. “The iguana being stretched into belts the beaver curling into handbags” (Soto). Unlike the Indians, they formed in tribes but they lived in peace. There were no fighting for traffic, pollutions and greedy. There were many lands to use and to walk but the European uses most of the lands to build roads and houses. There were fresh air and water but the immigrants brought cars and industry. There was variety of animals and insect but the businessman turned them into products to earn money. As Soto writes in his poem, “They were the first to leave, unnoticed, without words, for it no longer mattered to say the world was once blue.” The lifestyle of people who lived in American, as known as the Indians’, had transformed from naturalism to consumerism. However, people have to pay for what they did to the land one day.
The Indians, who were the first people who live in the land of the United States, lifestyle was forced to be changed. Their hunting skills could not make any living for them anymore because forest had been cleared and there were no longer large variety of animals. Indians no longer lived in tents because there were no more natural environment for them to live. Instead, they must live in house and serve the immigrants in order to earn their living. They no longer belonged to the nature. The poem discusses what the Indians did, “The villagers undid their houses, thatch by thatch, and unplucked the stick fences that held grief and leaned from the wind that swung their way.” They turned into city people. When cities were developing, environmental problem created. The beautiful nature described in “the First” was destroyed and there were no ways to turn back. Also, the nature of Indians had been destroyed by immigrant. The immigrant, who was called as explorer in the early history of the America, was the people who destroy the Indians original lifestyle and the people created all the problems. Most immigrants moved to California with their dreams. They dreamed for a better future, fortunate money, more opportunities, building a family, etc. During the European colonization, most immigrants were very wealthy. In order to survive, Indians must work for their living. Their style of simplicity and natural-driven had been transform into greedy.
Indians were the best worker for businessman. Since the Indians were people who best know the America natural environment, during Gold Rush, Indians worked for businessman looking for gold around rivers. Although it was a dangerous work, Indians could earn a lot from these jobs. They went out of the forest and land for money purpose. Also, the immigrants brought industry into the America. At the early development times, most industry produced dirty air and dirty water. It caused the problem of air and water pollution. “Their lakes bruised Gray with smoke that unraveled from cities” (Soto). Indians were hardworking people. Developers who built buildings, roads and pier hired Indians as well. Indians were not architects naturally but they learned fast. They learned and built many buildings and road. The Indians no longer belonged to themselves but they belong to money. They worked for people who paid them. They no longer lived in the forest or riverside but they lived in cities. They no longer hunted but they did all kind of industries to earn their living, the original lifestyle among them was no longer existed.
Many developments were made when people were chasing their California dreams. The development of road and highways were significant. Orange County in “Orange County Historian” is a good example for the development of California dream. Residents there reached some degree of their dreams. They had nice car, good schools, great jobs, good families, and nice houses. However, the traffic in there was always heavy.
“Orange County Historian” creates an imagination of how things went worse with all the destructions of nature and over development. In the poem, there were no more lands to develop in Orange County. “Between 1970 and 1990, Los Angeles’ population grew by 45-percent, but its developed land area increased 300 percent” (Carle). It shows the pace of development is always needed to be so fast, which means they have to find resources from undeveloped land. And those resources are found in the natural environment. Instead, even though the land was developed, it did not seem that life was going to be better, according to the poem. Freeways were congested and people who were driving nice cars were trapped in their way to work or school. They had been waited for many hours until they ran out of gas and they finally went back to the nature—walking. Nothing was operating. Schools were close. Mothers sent their children outside and those became gangs who made the city an unsafe place. The over development had made the place unpleasant for people to live. What about the natural environment? There were no more animals around because there were too many cars everywhere. Cars bring noise to the environment. Animals that live in the natural are sensitive to sound. When cars were driving on the road, many noises were produced. This place did not suitable for animals anymore. So they moved to northern place where less people living. However, some animals may be dying of coldness or hungriness.
From the poem, we realize a problem. There were too many cars on the road. And cars create polluted air. When “The First” already describing polluted air, more cars in “Orange County Historian” exist means more polluted air. However, people at that time did not realize the dangerous of air pollution. The natural of Indians been destroyed by the foreigners. America, where was a beautiful place on earth, was destroyed by human. The original residence of this land been forced to change, to move, and to work. Everything described in the poems became a chain. The victim, the Indians, lifestyle had forced to be change because of California dream of others and over development. With no one notice, the nature started to fight back. One day, people will need to pay for what they did to the land and its original resident.
Labeling Genetically Engineered Food
Genetically
Modified food is derived from Genetically Engineered Organism (GMOs).
Those GMOs have had specific changes in their DNA by genetic engineering
techniques. Hence the fundamental nature of the organism is changed,
sometimes in ways that would never occur in nature. Genetic engineered
food involves the insertion genes of insect, fish, animal into plants.
GM food brought an impact on food supply, the cost in manufacturing and
consuming, and the nutrition value inside food. In Proposition 37, it
requires the labeling of food sold to consumers made from plants or
animals with genetic material changed in specific ways. And it prohibits
marketing food as “natural.” I think labeling is useful to help
consumers to decide whether they would like to buy food that are
genetically modified.
| Dr. Ron Epstein |
Genetic
Engineered food should be labeled also because of the religious reason
for some people. It is because the way to make GM food is to insert
genes from animals or plants to another species. Therefore, for some
people, like religious vegetarian, they will not eat food that has been
modified by some genes from animal, insect or human. Due to genetic
engineering, most of the physical nature of foods we can find in grocery
store is changed. So if I am a vegetarian, when I go to grocery store
and want to buy some food, can I still consider the plant I am looking
is a plant? That may sounds weird, but it is true, imagine those food
under genetic engineering are not labeled, with certain kinds of genes
from different animals, people like Jews may be affected because they
have restrictions on food.
It
does not mean all GMOs are harmful to human body. Due to the success of
genetic engineering on food, our food source are sufficient, also we
have more nutrient food in our daily life. However, enhancing our
understanding on food we are eating is really important. No one wants to
be another victim under genetic engineering. As more and more countries
has joined to propose law to disclose as much information on food for
the public, why not United States?
Dark side of California
In
the second stanza of the song, RHCP talks about the geographic settings of
California. The song says, “It’s the edge of the world and all of western
civilization.” The influences made by the California during its development
from 1850s affected the whole world. Since the discovery of gold mines,
population increased rapidly. Natalie
Merchant sings in her song “San Andrea Fault” about why people should go to
California,” Go west, paradise is there…” The reason why California is called a
“paradise” is because of the Gold Rush. It brings out an idea that California is
the place for people to succeed if they are willing to. People with their own
dream come to California and try to struggle for a bright future. As the number
of people dreaming for success increases, it led to the largest voluntary
migration in the western history.
And this rapid growth in population
hastened the development of California. Although the Gold Rush ends in 1850s,
this place still has a huge impact in everyone’s heart.
Besides
the California geographic settings, RHCP also mentions the people in
California. Because of the uprising of Hollywood, its movie culture has
affected many people. RHCP thinks people are so idealized in their thinking.
There is a line talking about the idealization thought by people who are
affected by the Hollywood movie industry, “Marry me girl be my fairy to the
world. Be my very own constellation.” The musician use imagery in this line to
let the reader to visualize the picture of their dream boy/girl and send out a
message that people are not so realistic now. Moreover, the following line is
talking about “A teenage bride with a baby inside getting high on information.”
Due to the impact of the movie industry, people might think a young lady with a
baby in the movie is true and they should follow it. More and more people
followed the trend and the public started to concern on the problem. It led to
many juvenile delinquent problems. According to the Harper’s in early 1955, it reported that California juvenile
delinquent problem was “40 percent worse than the national average as the youth
poured the state “by the thousands.”” It shows that teenagers in California
have a really low sense on sex. According to a report in 2006 by Guttmacher
Institute, they have compiled the teenage pregnancy statistic in the United
States in 2000 and based on the data they had, they ranked the top ten states
with highest teenager pregnancy and birth rates. California ranks no.5 in the
United States in rates of pregnancy among woman age 15-19 (around 100
pregnancies per thousand).
From
the lines of the song, RHCP also express their opinion on California Dream.
They use an example of a dream of some little girls to talk about the
California Dream, “Little girls from Sweden dream of silver screen quotations,
and if you want these kind of dream, it’s Californication.” In “California—A
place, a People, a Dream,” James J. Rawls explains what is meant a California
Dream,
“For most of us, the California Dream is simply a
vision of the good life…Founded on expectation and hope, the California Dream
promises to fulfill our deepest longings for opportunity and success, warmth,
sunshine and beauty, health and long life, freedom, and even a foretaste of the
future (CDR 23).”
The reason why we specify it is a
California Dream is because California is the promised land. Since the Gold
Rush in 1850s, the state represents as a land with full of opportunities and
success. Also the band points out that Hollywood,
a historical center of movie studios and movie stars, sells those California
Dreams. However, from the wording used
in the song, we can see that Hollywood has its dark side. It has led to so many
problems. But why people still chasing the California Dream? It is because they
saw many people succeed in the Golden State. So they work hard to achieve and
make their dream come true – become a billionaire and gain position in the
society. They will not think about the dark side of the state since it is
overwhelmed by those successful stories of the celebrities from California like
Steve Jobs, the co-founder of Apple, or Leonardo DiCarprio, who became famous
after starring the movie Titanic.
Moreover,
there are few lines in “Californication” shows Red Hot Chili Peppers’
perspective on the culture of California. The song talks a lot about the
materialistic lifestyle in the state from the lines “pay your surgeon very well
to break the spell of aging. Celebrity skin is this your chin or is what that
war your waging” and “buy me a star on the boulevard.” After the World War II, the development of
California was accelerated. It resulted in search of a more luxurious way of
life among people. People resist becoming old when they own so much. They want
to be young forever and so they go for plastic surgery. In some sense, people
want to be famous so they do the plastic surgery too. Californians love
entertainment and they just enjoyed the luxury of leisure time and money to
burn. Kirse Grant May, writer of “Suburban Eden,” use a sentence to explain the
lifestyle in California, “new frontiers in living…the life that lures the
East.” Obviously, the lifestyle in California did affect a lot to other parts of
the United States. “California Fantasy” has affected those developers. They
started to follow the Californian lifestyle’s footstep and build the cities
that are closely identified with California. They just keep on spending more
and more money on building resorts or focusing on some leisure projects rather
than helping people who are in need or doing something meaningful.
Despite
those good things in California, Red Hot Chili Peppers has brought us into the
world we do not know. This world is totally different from we have already
known. Behind those glories, the state has a lot of dark sides, mostly from
Hollywood. People just received the wrong message from it and doing something
that is harmful for them. However, RHCP wrote the last stanza telling us even
it is hard, if you try to change, think positively, you will create something
good: “Destruction leads to a very rough road, but it also breeds creation.”
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